#1 Draft- Reader's Response to 'Globalization of Culture Through the Media'
In the article ‘Globalization of Culture
Through the Media’, Marwan M. Kraidy (2002) explores the different
factors that has led to culture hybridisation. He pointed out that the role of
media as a major factor that influenced global cultures greatly. The changes
transforming world culture was so significant that it prompted a worldwide debate
on the issue.
Kraidy’s (2002) arguments on how the
impact of globalization of the media was interesting as he raised both perspectives
of the positives and negatives effect it had on culture. He was critical in his
argument by isolating American values as the most influential among other
Western values. This is not surprising as the United States (US) was the most
influential and powerful nation during the era where globalization started to
emerge and widespread.
Kraidy’s (2002) perspective on cultural
hybridisation explains how globalization and localization are 2 dynamic factors
that interplay, resulting in the creation of hybrid values that mixed
traditional and cultural forms. In today’s modern world, we cannot deny the
fact that American culture has been adopted in most cultures today. From the
diversity of fields from movies (Hollywood), food, and fashion, just to name
some, internationally American values are in some way or another being blend
into locals’ culture, creating fusion by-products. From fashion branded items
such as Calvin Klein apparels or designers’ bags and accessories of Tony Burch
(Doran 2012), the global market are trending towards American goods.
One of reasons that allowed the American
culture be exposed and known to a large audience internationally is due to the
Internet and media. It has been recognised that “global media and information
technologies have substantially increased contacts between cultures, both in
terms of intensity and of the speed with which these two contacts occur” (Kraidy
2002). This statement is highly true when internet shopping websites are a
plenty nowadays like asos.com, where anyone from the world are able to buy
American products with just a click of a button. The Internet has revolutionised
on how we receive and retrieve information, and online shopping enables
individuals to adopt American fashion with ease as boundaries are eliminated
with globalization.
The debate on culture and media is an on-going
process, where the complexities of the issue are very much subjective. However,
there is no denial of how the media and the Internet have helped to boost the
awareness of American culture through online information where it is highly
accessible. We ourselves need to be aware of the constraint of a hybridised
culture, where there is limitation to a certain degree of the acceptance of
American values that should not contradict our own culture. The consequences of
an imbalanced mixed is inevitable as there is no universal indicator that control
individual liberty of choice.
References:
Doran, S. 2012. The Most Searched For American
Fashion Brands in the World. [ONLINE] Available at:
http://luxurysociety.com/articles/2012/10/the-most-searched-for-american-fashion-brands-in-the-world.
[Accessed 18 September 13]
Kraidy, Marwan M.. 2002. 'Globalization of Culture
Through the Media. [ONLINE] Available at:
http://repository.upenn.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1333&context=asc_papers.
[Accessed 18 September 13].
6 comments:
You are quite hardworking as you picked up the other article. Well done! However, for in-text citation, we need to mention the author's name plus the year once in the beginning. After that, you can just say the author's name without the mention of the year. \(^^)/
Hi Ipin,
You have a very concise reader's response here! I like how you expressed the author's stand and slowly filter and narrow down to the topic you want to discuss!I'm quite impressed with the way you handled the references. However you may want to take not of the use of both "affect" and "effect".
Eg.
(i) this has affected....
(ii) this has resulted in the effects of...
Overall, a job well done!!:)
Cheers,
Cherlyn
Liu Ming- I think I did what you mentioned. Look at my first sentence, or you meant by something else?
Cherlyn- Thank you for the compliment. I actually read yours 1st to get a rough outline! And appreciate that u pointed out the difference of 'affect' and 'effect'.
Hi Ipin,
After reading your essay, my group thinks that- you have successfully summarized the article and explained the points you want to discuss. There is clear and insightful summary and analysis of the text. It is good that you took the effort to cover so many points in the article, but it would be better if you can narrow down your focus.There are too many ideas discussed.You have presented your ideas remarkably and conveyed your opinions well. There are correct uses of citations. (both In-text and out-of-text)
For your introduction, you have focused on too many ideas from the article.Your paragraphs flowed well and they are coherent.It was a concise conclusion and you have reiterated your main points clearly.
There are effective uses of various sentence types to achieve intended purpose or meaning.Grammar is generally correct. But do take note of sentence structure problems.There should be more consistency in the tenses used. For example,“ He pointed out that the role of media as a major factor that influenced global cultures greatly.”should be using "points" here instead of past tense. You provide quite a wide range of vocabulary,For introduction and conclusion were very well written in re-emphasising the main ideas. However, in paragraphs that you described additional points, it wasn’t very fluently conveyed.Punctuate and spell with almost no errors.You have used a formal, measured and suitable style that is appropriate and if the errors are corrected, it would be suitable for academic audience.
Cheers,
Desheng
Thanks Desheng, Leah & Cherlyn for the insightful analysis & comments to my response. Indeed, I agree that there is room for more improvement here. I'm truly grateful for the feedback given.
Smiles,
Ipin
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